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Jerry Krummel's avatar

When I taught at the college level, I never got so lucky as to have one of my female students persuade me to re-evaluate a term paper with this kind of tactic! I liked how the story progressed and as a reader you had my attention from the first paragraph to the end. At this point I would give the paper a strong B+. However, I maybe could be convinced to re-evaluate it! 🤣🔥🥰

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Vivienne St. James Erotica's avatar

Professor, a B+? I’m devastated! 😂 Clearly my bibliography wasn’t seductive enough. I’ll be in your office at 3 p.m. with coffee, cookies, and a revised works-cited page that I’m hoping will sway even the toughest grader. No promises on the cookies being store-bought, though… bribery is still an art form. 😉 Thanks for reading, and for the ego-boosting grade!

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Jerry Krummel's avatar

Being the cookie monster that I am, homemade are always better, but store bought works! I'll note sweet coffee like Tanzanian Peaberry might help too!

I'll look forward to seeing your revised works cited page! Adding any of my works to your bibliography, sure wouldn't hurt either! 🤣

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Bill Suefert's avatar

Passed

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Vivienne St. James Erotica's avatar

You think so? 😉

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Robert Thompson's avatar

Short and sweet. I like the way you show how much power the women have over the men in your stories. Can’t wait for the next instalment.

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Vivienne St. James Erotica's avatar

Power can be such a delicious thing to play with.

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T .Vale ⎹ Fiction for Adults's avatar

Excellent. Despite this being short, you still managed to maintain a strong, teasing build up. Loved it!

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Vivienne St. James Erotica's avatar

Thank you! I love a good tease…

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Yolanda D.'s avatar

Incredible short story!

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Vivienne St. James Erotica's avatar

That means more than you know. I like when my words leave a mark. 💋😈

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Yolanda D.'s avatar

🔥🔥🔥

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